I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

Last Updated: 03.07.2025 01:10

I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

He doesn't like her cat

He forgets his wallet

He is always late

Is it wrong of me to feel uncomfortable that my friend thinks my brother is hot?

He always cracks his knuckles.

He's never available on Saturdays

He's always helping his ex

What are you wearing under your clothes today?

He's always the last one to leave a party